Reminds me a lot of the "Doodlez" cartoons. Same concept with the pencil altering the storyline and messing with the character. Hopefully you can use them as inspiration for your next video :)
Really lovely animation. Simple, and when combined with the text, very power. The slight use of red also added to her emotions. The only real let down was the transition between music. You could've made sure there was no gap, and that the genre of the music didn't change greatly from for example, slow and sad, to upbeat and epic.
Overall, really well done. Another favourite from me :)
thank you! :)
I haven't laughed that hard at a guy's face before :D you better keep this going
Simple animation. Deep story line. Suspensful music. This is honestly one of the best animations I've ever seen. I love how this actually draws on a moral, and isn't a pointless animation. I can't wait to see more from you in the future! :)
Gave me goosebumps
You've captured emotion, art, and feelings in one animation. This is superb, keep up the amazing work :D
Very entertaining. The humor was good and enjoyable. Some things I didn't really like was the poor music cut outs, the voice with mouth sync, and the length of the movie as it didn't have a pause button.
But over all, very enjoyable with room for improvement. I believe this has some good potential! :)
But SERIOUSLY, have a pause button :)
Just a beautiful piece of work. I think the most effective thing in this was the music, just the piano playing broken chords transitioning from major to minor in relation to the flash was just wonderful :)
The art, character detail, environment, and structure detail were all flawless, and the storyline, although short, very easy to understand what the characters were going through.
Keep up the good work!! 5/5
First Review of 2011
This was just really really short, and I had no idea what just happened.
Not Too Bad
There was the humour at the start and everything. The voices were a bit hard to understand, so the text on screen is a good idea. The heads moving were also very good. Because it's such a short flash and the ending was completely random and just silly, it really detracted from the overall feel. Just a bit disappointing.
I have never laughed so hard at an ending :D
I really thought the little baby character and soft toy sound was very effective. Awesome work :) 5
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