Really lovely animation. Simple, and when combined with the text, very power. The slight use of red also added to her emotions. The only real let down was the transition between music. You could've made sure there was no gap, and that the genre of the music didn't change greatly from for example, slow and sad, to upbeat and epic.
Overall, really well done. Another favourite from me :)
thank you! :)
Simple animation. Deep story line. Suspensful music. This is honestly one of the best animations I've ever seen. I love how this actually draws on a moral, and isn't a pointless animation. I can't wait to see more from you in the future! :)
thank you! :)
Different take with pokemon
I couldn't stop laughing through this, you have a very good sense of humor.
The music is good and very original, and that should stay the same.
Graphically, there is some work that needs to be done, as some of the sprites of the humans have green edges around them. Also a proper title screen and credits should be created.
The layout of the button was annoying, as it's extremely small. I would just make one button in a corner of the flash that you can press to move on to the next slide of words.
Well done. I look forward to seeing more in the future =)
Thank you!
I will take these ideas and put it in the next ep.
they are good ideas and appreciate your comment.
You just watch the next one and you will love it :)
Really really poor
The ONLY good thing was the music... which actually somehow turns to crap after you watch this 20 times.
watever im geting better
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